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2025-03-19 原本 Recently, I have been thinking about the meaning of travaling. “Is the greatest building more importance?” or “Is Less Payment of travaling and envirment of travling much more importance?” After I come back from Janpen, I found Japen is very suitable for traveler. The payment in Japen is not very high, also the transport fee is cheap, not stealing money, not rober, food is very delicious, even the convenience store also sell delicious food and open 24 hours.
修正後 Recently, I have been thinking about the meaning of traveling. “Is the greatest building more important?” or “Are lower travel costs and a good travel environment much more important?” After I came back from Japan, I found that Japan is very suitable for travelers. The cost of living in Japan is not very high, and the transportation fees are cheap. There is no theft or robbery, the food is very delicious, and even the convenience stores sell tasty food and are open 24 hours.
原本 Today I’m watching TV, and the news reported a boby was abused by nanny, I feel so angry, Why nanny so evil, Why people come to earth for what? The earth is a prison, so evil person come to earth to torture other people. A baby is so small, Why did she do that! I feel so depression. The nanny doesn’t have humanity. The law is not fair to the evil people like this nanny, The punishment of this nanny is low. This nanny won’t be regretful.
修正後 Today, I was watching TV, and the news reported that a baby was abused by a nanny. I felt so angry. Why is the nanny so evil? Why do people come to Earth, and for what purpose? The Earth feels like a prison, where evil people come to torture others. A baby is so small and innocent—why would she do that? I feel so depressed. The nanny has no humanity. The law is not fair to evil people like this nanny. The punishment for this nanny is too light. I doubt this nanny will ever feel remorseful.
2025-03-20 I had bad sleep yesterday. Because I searched many information of renting a car about traveling in Egypt. Becasue a deposit of 150 us dollar on renting car is so much. I have to prepare a lot of us dollar in Egypt. The thief or robber will steal money from me. It’s very dangerous. The highly deposit of renting car is problem.
修正後 I had a bad sleep last night because I spent a lot of time searching for information about renting a car for traveling in Egypt. A deposit of 150 US dollars for renting a car is too high. I have to carry a lot of US dollars in Egypt, which makes me worried about thieves or robbers targeting me. It feels very dangerous. The high deposit for renting a car is a real problem.
Many people went to the outside of the court to protest the punishment of abusing child is too light. They demand to modify the low that the person who abuse or tourture child causing die must be die. Many people can’t standar the low which can’t threat evil people do really bad things to others.
修正後 Many people gathered outside the court to protest that the punishment for child abuse is too lenient. They are demanding to amend the law so that anyone who abuses or tortures a child, resulting in death, must be sentenced to death. Many people cannot tolerate a law that fails to deter evil individuals from committing such horrific acts against others.
2025-03-28 Child do something is not meaning and purpose, when they feel happy and than they draw a picture, when they want to make a story and then they write a novel. They do those things just for fun. Making a comic book is for hobby. The inital purpose is not for business. But child grow up become a adult, they do anyting will concern the benifit and how much time will be cost. Because they grow up, they have a family , they have to earn more money to raise their children, they need food and a place to live which is not free, they have to consider what kind of job can earn more money. The job career is important for the whole life.
修正後的版本： When children do something, it is without specific meaning or purpose. They draw pictures when they feel happy, and they write stories when they want to create something. They do these things purely for fun. Making a comic book is just a hobby, and the initial purpose is not for business.
However, when children grow up and become adults, they start considering the benefits and the time cost of everything they do. As adults, they have families to support and need to earn money to raise their children. Food and shelter are not free, so they must think about which jobs can provide a stable income. Career choices become crucial because they impact their entire lives.